The First Time I Saw

The first time I saw

the sun rise on the low grass strewn vale I knew I had found a home for my heart, and for my true love, to live in joy.

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5 comments
  1. Really like the imagery in this, except you’ve used words that are more than one syllable long. If you change them it can still be considered! 🙂

    • Durn it, I forgot about that stipulation! Ok, I think its fixed now… :~)

  2. Can’t ask for much more from life to find that level of personal peace and contentment. Beautiful message. Well done! 🙂

  3. Draug419 said:

    Great work.

  4. grass,strewn vale, I would love to be there too.

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