The First Time I Saw

The first time I saw

the sun rise on the low grass strewn vale I knew I had found a home for my heart, and for my true love, to live in joy.

  1. Really like the imagery in this, except you’ve used words that are more than one syllable long. If you change them it can still be considered! 🙂

    • Durn it, I forgot about that stipulation! Ok, I think its fixed now… :~)

  2. Can’t ask for much more from life to find that level of personal peace and contentment. Beautiful message. Well done! 🙂

  3. Draug419 said:

    Great work.

  4. grass,strewn vale, I would love to be there too.

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